Astounding visions of wishes and dreams
Ignited by something soul deep within schemes
Awaken my mind, my body and essence
To bring me aware of unworldly presence
You enter and stamp, a domineering clasp
I stand still and frozen as time shivers past
Away from control, beyond understanding
I wretch at my thoughts, the wrongdoings, demanding
Wrath for my self, the lust I possess
The need of intrigue, fascination abreast
Cannot yet falter and cannot yet lay
No rest for my mind expansion affray
Consumed by your sense but chance strikes me not
Continue engrained entangled and wrought
Captured and taken, confusion abound
The wonder of this, your sight and your sound
Not yet awakened, to likely not be
For you are too far, unreachable for me
Note: I copy and pasted, with the format not translating well!!
Wow. I read it several times to get the flow right. Really impressive!
Yeah, sorry it was all skewed!!! And thank you for your response :)
Great! The second verse really struck me. Very familiar to my situation.
Thanking you kindly. It's nice you could connect 🙂
She is astounding
god made everyone beautiful flaws and all
You could hangout with someone who gives you positive influence? *Hugs*
I don't really
I don't really have anyone, Eugene. I'm a bit of a loner as I struggle with friends
U have almost 300 hugs on here feel the love! : )
Write a song!
That's interesting. I used to write poetry when I was younger and going through my 'Emo' stage. Maybe I should try to write again..
You've probably read more books since then and could do it more seriously in some ways. Go for it! Even if no one ever reads it, it's something that you created and is meaningful to you, which is special.
I'm following and expect those sick bars to drop soon, counting on you!
Make a blog with ur poems and post us the link to share them : ) i would love to read them i love poetry : )